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Title: gazal
Post by: HINA on November 08, 2012, 01:10:02 AM
Pyar Me Wo Ruswa Kar Gaye
Khush They Akele, Zindagi Tabaah Kar Gaye
Jee Lete Hum Unke Bina
Lekin,
Wo Bedard Dil Tod Ke Tukade Bhi Saath Le Gaye...
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: saleem on November 08, 2012, 01:13:58 AM
wah wah wah very nice
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: HINA on November 08, 2012, 01:15:52 AM
ty :)
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: HINA on November 08, 2012, 01:17:38 AM
Baat thi muhabat ki,

Umar bhar ki chahat ki,

Bheer mein zamanay ki

Saath saath chalna tha,

Imthaan

b aanay thay,

Zindagi k sabhi pal

Saath hi bitanay thay,

Janay

Us ne kya socha?

Bus ik pal mein

hi,

Baat khatam kar dali,

Zindagi jo pouri thi

Wo adhouri kar dali,

Per koun

Usko samjhaye?

K muhabaton

K Mausam b,

Roz to nahi aatay!

Youn zindagi me

Apnon ko....

Chhorr to nhi jaty...!
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: HINA on November 08, 2012, 01:19:24 AM
Zindagi Tab "BEHTAR"Hoti Hai

Jab Aap

KHUSH Hote Hai Lekin Zindagi

Tab

"BEHTAREEN"Hoti Hay

Jab Apki Wajah Se koi dosra KHUSH Hota Ha.
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: saleem on November 08, 2012, 01:25:52 AM
sahii behtreen zindagi ke liye sab ko khush karna padta he
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: HINA on November 08, 2012, 01:29:57 AM
ji janab bilkul..
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: saleem on November 08, 2012, 01:35:13 AM
hhmm thank you
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: HINA on November 08, 2012, 01:44:49 AM
<3 Bohat se log thay mehman meray ghar lekin,
Woh janta tha ke hai ehtimam kis ke liye.... <3
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: saleem on November 08, 2012, 01:59:20 AM
ap to baddi shaira he madam
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Arslan Anjum on November 09, 2012, 07:37:24 PM

Pyar Me Wo Ruswa Kar Gaye
Khush They Akele, Zindagi Tabaah Kar Gaye
Jee Lete Hum Unke Bina
Lekin,
Wo Bedard Dil Tod Ke Tukade Bhi Saath Le Gaye...

Wow awesome poetry!
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Samira Sheikh on November 10, 2012, 12:08:03 AM

Pyar Me Wo Ruswa Kar Gaye
Khush They Akele, Zindagi Tabaah Kar Gaye
Jee Lete Hum Unke Bina
Lekin,
Wo Bedard Dil Tod Ke Tukade Bhi Saath Le Gaye...

Zalim insaan :o
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: saleem on November 10, 2012, 06:34:18 PM
dhere dhere dur hote gae
waqt ke aage majboor hote gae

her rishte me ham ne aisee chhot khae
ke ham befawa oor sab be qasoor hote gae
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Mariya Abro on November 25, 2012, 09:05:08 PM
bas apki kami hain hehehe
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Ali on November 26, 2012, 02:32:21 PM

Pyar Me Wo Ruswa Kar Gaye
Khush They Akele, Zindagi Tabaah Kar Gaye
Jee Lete Hum Unke Bina
Lekin,
Wo Bedard Dil Tod Ke Tukade Bhi Saath Le Gaye...
allaaw shair.... Zabrdast :)
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Ali on November 26, 2012, 02:40:20 PM

Baat thi muhabat ki,

Umar bhar ki chahat ki,

Bheer mein zamanay ki

Saath saath chalna tha,

Imthaan

b aanay thay,

Zindagi k sabhi pal

Saath hi bitanay thay,

Janay

Us ne kya socha?

Bus ik pal mein

hi,

Baat khatam kar dali,

Zindagi jo pouri thi

Wo adhouri kar dali,

Per koun

Usko samjhaye?

K muhabaton

K Mausam b,

Roz to nahi aatay!

Youn zindagi me

Apnon ko....

Chhorr to nhi jaty...!
ruswa kre gi ye nami jo chashm-e-tarr me hai...!!
pee jao ashk, baat abi ghar ki ghar mein hai... !!
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Ali on November 28, 2012, 04:56:25 AM
Aankhon Men Haya Ho To Parda Dil Ka Hi Kaafi He


Nahi to Naqabon Se Bhi Hoty Hen Ishary MOHABAT k..
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Ali on November 29, 2012, 09:09:46 AM
Mujhay Bikharnay Na Do Meray MuQad'dar Ki tarha,,,


Yeh Teri Zulf Nhi Jo Pal Bhar May Sanwar jayeGi...
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Samira Sheikh on November 29, 2012, 10:04:42 AM
wah wah , aur karo piyar
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Samira Sheikh on November 29, 2012, 10:13:56 AM

Baat thi muhabat ki,

Umar bhar ki chahat ki,

Bheer mein zamanay ki

Saath saath chalna tha,

Imthaan

b aanay thay,

Zindagi k sabhi pal

Saath hi bitanay thay,

Janay

Us ne kya socha?

Bus ik pal mein

hi,

Baat khatam kar dali,

Zindagi jo pouri thi

Wo adhouri kar dali,

Per koun

Usko samjhaye?

K muhabaton

K Mausam b,

Roz to nahi aatay!

Youn zindagi me

Apnon ko....

Chhorr to nhi jaty...!

nice
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Ali on November 29, 2012, 11:53:58 AM

wah wah , aur karo piyar
haha nahi jee itna hi kafi hai... :)
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Samira Sheikh on November 30, 2012, 12:01:26 AM


wah wah , aur karo piyar
haha nahi jee itna hi kafi hai... :)

hahahaha lagta hai FULL STOP lag gaya  :o
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Ali on November 30, 2012, 01:29:07 AM



wah wah , aur karo piyar
haha nahi jee itna hi kafi hai... :)

hahahaha lagta hai FULL STOP lag gaya  :o
hahaha Full Stop nhi laga , pakka stop lag gaya hai :P
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Samira Sheikh on November 30, 2012, 09:24:01 AM




wah wah , aur karo piyar
haha nahi jee itna hi kafi hai... :)

hahahaha lagta hai FULL STOP lag gaya  :o
hahaha Full Stop nhi laga , pakka stop lag gaya hai :P

chalo acha hai koi ek tu acha kaam kia , thokar lagne k baad
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Ali on November 30, 2012, 09:42:12 AM





wah wah , aur karo piyar
haha nahi jee itna hi kafi hai... :)

hahahaha lagta hai FULL STOP lag gaya  :o
hahaha Full Stop nhi laga , pakka stop lag gaya hai :P

chalo acha hai koi ek tu acha kaam kia , thokar lagne k baad
hehe thokar to abi lagi hi nhi :)
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Samira Sheikh on November 30, 2012, 09:48:50 AM






wah wah , aur karo piyar
haha nahi jee itna hi kafi hai... :)

hahahaha lagta hai FULL STOP lag gaya  :o
hahaha Full Stop nhi laga , pakka stop lag gaya hai :P

chalo acha hai koi ek tu acha kaam kia , thokar lagne k baad
hehe thokar to abi lagi hi nhi :)

Allah mauf karay, abhi kuch hua  nahi k itna ghaam , Allah na karay kuch hojaye ga tu phir???
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Ali on November 30, 2012, 09:58:52 AM







wah wah , aur karo piyar
haha nahi jee itna hi kafi hai... :)

hahahaha lagta hai FULL STOP lag gaya  :o
hahaha Full Stop nhi laga , pakka stop lag gaya hai :P

chalo acha hai koi ek tu acha kaam kia , thokar lagne k baad
hehe thokar to abi lagi hi nhi :)

Allah mauf karay, abhi kuch hua  nahi k itna ghaam , Allah na karay kuch hojaye ga tu phir???
hehe umeed achi rakhni chahiye sistr... :)
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Samira Sheikh on November 30, 2012, 10:10:49 AM








wah wah , aur karo piyar
haha nahi jee itna hi kafi hai... :)

hahahaha lagta hai FULL STOP lag gaya  :o
hahaha Full Stop nhi laga , pakka stop lag gaya hai :P

chalo acha hai koi ek tu acha kaam kia , thokar lagne k baad
hehe thokar to abi lagi hi nhi :)

Allah mauf karay, abhi kuch hua  nahi k itna ghaam , Allah na karay kuch hojaye ga tu phir???
hehe umeed achi rakhni chahiye sistr... :)

sister  ::) ::) ::) ::) ::) mai koi nurse nahi hoon
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Ali on November 30, 2012, 10:22:00 AM









wah wah , aur karo piyar
haha nahi jee itna hi kafi hai... :)

hahahaha lagta hai FULL STOP lag gaya  :o
hahaha Full Stop nhi laga , pakka stop lag gaya hai :P

chalo acha hai koi ek tu acha kaam kia , thokar lagne k baad
hehe thokar to abi lagi hi nhi :)

Allah mauf karay, abhi kuch hua  nahi k itna ghaam , Allah na karay kuch hojaye ga tu phir???
hehe umeed achi rakhni chahiye sistr... :)

sister  ::) ::) ::) ::) ::) mai koi nurse nahi hoon
ok sory..
To phir main ap ko kia kaha krun?
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Samira Sheikh on November 30, 2012, 01:01:56 PM




hehe umeed achi rakhni chahiye sistr... :)
sister  ::) ::) ::) ::) ::) mai koi nurse nahi hoon
ok sory..
To phir main ap ko kia kaha krun?

Baji bolo, aapi bolo but plz sister maat bolo
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Mariya Abro on November 30, 2012, 02:22:31 PM
mujhe b baji hy bolo aj se ali bhai
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Ali on November 30, 2012, 04:30:08 PM





hehe umeed achi rakhni chahiye sistr... :)
sister  ::) ::) ::) ::) ::) mai koi nurse nahi hoon
ok sory..
To phir main ap ko kia kaha krun?

Baji bolo, aapi bolo but plz sister maat bolo
haha aapi theak rahy ga :P
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Samira Sheikh on November 30, 2012, 05:21:51 PM






hehe umeed achi rakhni chahiye sistr... :)
sister  ::) ::) ::) ::) ::) mai koi nurse nahi hoon
ok sory..
To phir main ap ko kia kaha krun?

Baji bolo, aapi bolo but plz sister maat bolo
haha aapi theak rahy ga :P

Bilkul aap mujh ko aapi hi bolna
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Ali on November 30, 2012, 06:11:25 PM







hehe umeed achi rakhni chahiye sistr... :)
sister  ::) ::) ::) ::) ::) mai koi nurse nahi hoon
ok sory..
To phir main ap ko kia kaha krun?

Baji bolo, aapi bolo but plz sister maat bolo
haha aapi theak rahy ga :P

Bilkul aap mujh ko aapi hi bolna
ok aapi jee :) now happy?
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Ali on December 07, 2012, 12:56:50 PM
Fitrat , Soch Aur Halaat Main Tasaadum hai Warna.... ,

Insan Kaisa Bhi ho , Dil ka Bura Nahin Hota .....!
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: awais on December 15, 2012, 10:31:49 PM
wonderful and fantastic.
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: Ali on January 06, 2013, 06:08:50 PM
Mere Dil Ki Khawaishen Reh Reh Kar Poochengee Ek Din Uss Se...!

Kis Ko Aabad Kiya Hai Mujh Ko Barbaad Kar Ke....!!
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: aanaya on March 21, 2013, 04:13:44 PM
Nice poetry
Title: Re: gazal
Post by: farrukhjavaid on July 06, 2013, 12:00:56 AM
umar bhr likhty rahe magar warq sada rha.

Maloom nahi wo kia lafz thy jo mujh sy tehreer na hoye